Andy Bogard and Mai Shiranui are copyrighted by SNK Playmore. Woman at right is a random character I just made.
Perhaps it's not the best angle for Mai's state, but I'm sure this one had to be portrayed this way.
I want to think that if the Mai I'm drawing could be real she'd get more than just weird stares. And since I gave her such a clean and healthy belly skin, I bet other people would notice the absence of the feared stretch marks. That's why the woman at the right side it's in the picture; I plan to add a comment from her that says:
EXCUSE ME, I COULDN'T HELP BUT NOTICE HOW HEALTHY IS YOUR SKIN... DO YOU PUT ON SOMETHING TO PREVENT STRETCH MARKS?
Or somehting like that. I'd really like you to tell me if the phrase above is OK or if I should make any changes.
Though it's not the first time I draw Andy, I feel like it was. Most of my attempts have left me unsatified, I hope I had done this one well enough.
This time I wasn't so detailed with the sadows because, honestly, I just don't know how they shall be. Fortunately, Mai and Andy are under the umbrella, so they are likely to require little shadowing, I think...
Thank you.
I'm not sure if I could add a punch line, I just can't think of other phrases, humorous or not. So, I just focused on trying to make a phrase that a real person would use with a stranger.
Hmm...I personally can't think of a punchline right now, but I'll ponder one when it's not six-thirty in the morning. As for the rest of it, it's very nice. I like how Mai and Andy look so very unconcerned that Mai is so much bigger for a girl in her state than usual. I'd defiinitely like to see you continue with this, it's shaping up very nicely.
Although I want to ask you about Mai breasts - I think that her left breasts should feel slighty a bit gravity because they are swollen with milk considering her state (I mean about shape of her boob in that angle should be more eliptic still. Of course, considering that she has bikini bra ). Right one looks like it done perfect.
But if that is your intention....well I like them round and big too and you are the artist! I would have never do it so good!
The line is fine as is. Hmmm...I actually think Andy looks a bit upset, as though he was interrupted. I understand if he was napping or something, but otherwise...
It looks very nice.
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Help! Witch's curse shrank me! Cops chasing me! I live with my mom! NO MOTIVATING GOALS!!!
Well, Andy probably feels a bit uneasy, but it never crossed my mind when doing this picture. And I definitely plan to finish this one, it's part of the main subject of my gallery.
Well, yeah, the bikini is supposed to help . And I also prefer not to be too realistic with certain body parts. Buth then again, there's some assimetry that I can't justify; and I fear that fixing it will have some cost for the image. I'll give it a try, still.
BTW, as far as I know there's not supposed to be any milk there; there's a genuine growth of tissue during pregnancy as far as I know.
Well, I didn't meant to make him look too annoyed, perhaps I got the wrong face experssion. But I guess that since Mai would call attention too much, he would feel uneasy if people keep approaching to talk to them too often.
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as for the phrase it's ok to me but if ya want you
can try and give it a lil punchline at the end maybe,
but that's jus me
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I'm not sure if I could add a punch line, I just can't think of other phrases, humorous or not. So, I just focused on trying to make a phrase that a real person would use with a stranger.
Although I want to ask you about Mai breasts - I think that her left breasts should feel slighty a bit gravity because they are swollen with milk considering her state (I mean about shape of her boob in that angle should be more eliptic still. Of course, considering that she has bikini bra
But if that is your intention....well I like them round and big too
It looks very nice.
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Help! Witch's curse shrank me! Cops chasing me! I live with my mom! NO MOTIVATING GOALS!!!
Well, yeah, the bikini is supposed to help
BTW, as far as I know there's not supposed to be any milk there; there's a genuine growth of tissue during pregnancy as far as I know.
Well, I didn't meant to make him look too annoyed, perhaps I got the wrong face experssion. But I guess that since Mai would call attention too much, he would feel uneasy if people keep approaching to talk to them too often.
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